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'S Just A Little Wine, Love by ~Blaisism:iconBlaisism:



‘S just a little wine, love.
No reason to worry yourself so,
‘S just a little wine, love.
And the bottle was already low.

‘S just a little wine, love.
So don’t you fret about me,
‘S just a little wine, love.
It was only a glass (well, at least three).

‘S just a little wine, love.
Yes, that is ALL I had.
‘S just a little wine, love.
(And it never made my lying bad.)

‘S just a little wine, love.
Ignore what they all say.
‘S just a little wine, love.
There is no need to pray.

‘S just a little wine, love.
So what if all the bottles are gone?
‘S just a little wine, love.
I have to be home by dawn.

‘S just a little wine, love.
Or at least that’s what I said.
‘S just a little wine, love.
Emptied bottle by my hospital bed.
©2009 ~Blaisism
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Author's Comments

Wrote this a few minutes ago for a forum contest and won. XD

Thought I'd share it with you all.

Critique, please? :3

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I like how you build it up :]
So you can tell where the ending is headed
but it still strikes you

Amazing job :]

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